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sWEEtmICHe
11-29-2003, 03:52 PM
love oh love

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I am a sick love puppy
while shivering in the leaf
shaking voice heard your
foot steps.......
my stopped eyes awakes!!
it echoes in my tympanic
fantasy or reality ?
when it came deep down the
shallow heart and appears.
i saw rainbow in the rain.
and the rain remembers
not umbrella but your face
and made me quench my thirst
and will it kill me ???
every move i can hear you
torturing my heart .. with your name
is it love or you're eating me with love
where is the yesterday's eye
my shoulder freezes now.
can you come forward .....and reach me ?

Poem is written by Author:MCgaL(sWEEtmICHe)

thirudan
11-29-2003, 06:07 PM
ungaloda kavithai pakkam parthen, nagueverla , romba arumai....vaazhthukkal..:b:
thiru...:b:

sWEEtmICHe
11-29-2003, 09:59 PM
thiru ........ nandri :sm30:

gsatnan
11-29-2003, 10:06 PM
love ur poem.... is it ur own thoughts..... its damn good....get more like this

suryalover
11-29-2003, 11:17 PM
Kavithai Puyal nu title Kudukalama?...

Sorry Kavithai enpathu menmai yana visayam..

So Kavithai Thendral nu pattam vechuukonga.... :wink:

sWEEtmICHe
11-30-2003, 02:02 AM
gsatnan :Ksp:
hey fRIENd,it's ma pouring!!
thank u
nice knowing u
gooday

sWEEtmICHe
11-30-2003, 02:02 AM
So Kavithai Thendral nu pattam vechuukonga..
thanks surya....hehe
gooday :wink: :wink:

Minik
12-01-2003, 04:03 AM
Nice poem sweetmiche. I have seen a lot of poems in lovetamil also. contribute more of it here in this forum. and welcome to geetham, and pour out your comments and ideas in the secrets of married life. :sm08:

selpra
12-01-2003, 07:26 PM
its nice.

sWEEtmICHe
12-03-2003, 06:56 AM
Nice poem sweetmiche. I have seen a lot of poems in lovetamil also. contribute more of it here in this forum. and welcome to geetham, and pour out your comments and ideas in the secrets of married life. :sm08:
thank u Minik...
so sweet of u
sure I will :wink:

sWEEtmICHe
12-03-2003, 06:59 AM
its nice.
thank u :b:

sWEEtmICHe
01-04-2004, 07:27 AM
thiru.......I am sick puppy now!! :cry: