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sweetie
08-30-2003, 12:43 PM
Amidst a thousand lights
but still in the dark
What a precious life
with lot more in stock

Never has the wind passed me by
without breathing her name
it seems to enjoy
this lovely little game.

I cant resist the temptation
of doing things the wrong way
for I have, nothing more
in life to play.

Being a part of life
is all she does, even if I wish,
she be with me, and give me
the eternal bliss.

As the winds of time
blows sand over our hopes
one still survives
Hope our love lives and never dies!!

vennai1
09-02-2003, 07:38 PM
this is ok . not all that super though as the previous
mother senti poem.

arumugam57
09-02-2003, 08:13 PM
HOW IS THIS vennai?


" Amma Enralaikatha Uyirillaye?
Ammavai Vanangathu onnumillaye "

"Neeril Inru
Kanum Theivam
Petha Ammavai Pola vera yaaru? "

sweetie
09-03-2003, 01:40 AM
Vennai... :) Though my post now may or may not be relelvant to urs.... still read on...

Vennai.... Jus remember one imp point... U can *never* compare any two works ... not only this.... anyone's for that matter... U cannot compare them machaan... they are all written in different situations, different environments, and most importantly with different thoughts in mind.... :)

So each one has a beauty of its own, which can be and will be seen only by the Author who penned it.... :) U know... coz he alone knows *what* made him write that and why he ended up writing it...

Neway.... I am jus telling you.... :) Afterall as much as the right of the author on his work, it is the right of an individual to comment on that and choose the one he likes the most...
:wink: :wink: :wink: :wink: :wink: :wink:

:b: :b: :b: :b: :b: :b: :b: :b: :b: :b:

vennai1
09-03-2003, 06:26 PM
sweetie,

kochukaathey... etho i just told my opinion...
nothing to degrade the author.... so be cool and
keep the poems coming... :D

sweetie
09-04-2003, 03:02 AM
Aiyo en kannu kutty VENNAI .......

Naan kochikkilai da chellam........ :wink: :wink: :wink: :wink:

ADMIN .... Enakku ippo VENNAI kiss pannanum pola irunthuchu... but oru *kiissing icon* kooda illa....... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

Why dun u have one *kissing icon* like what u have in yahoo ???? That is a damn cute icon u know.... hope the ADMIN will have it here soon...

and VENNAI ... :ahha: :ahha: :ahha: :ahha: athukku appuram unna kiss panren.. :ahha: :ahha: :ahha: :ahha: :ahha: :ahha: :ahha: :ahha: :ahha: :ahha:

thirudan
09-04-2003, 10:08 AM
yea this is a nice poem too, and i need some songs of the sort of emotions which are with the sun..u got it? else write me..will explain... :cool:

arumugam57
09-04-2003, 11:31 AM
Sweetie.. You can take some kissing symbols from so many site.. Y u worry?

silican
09-04-2003, 02:30 PM
ADMIN .... Enakku ippo VENNAI kiss pannanum pola irunthuchu... but oru *kiissing icon* kooda illa....... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

modhalla Kiss pannanum pola irukkunnu solluva ....aduthu :think:

Silican

sweetie
09-04-2003, 02:55 PM
Aduthu enna ????????

Hug pannanum pola irukku nu solven... avalothaan....... :wink: :wink: :wink: :ahha: :ahha: :ahha: :ahha: :ahha:

vennai1
09-04-2003, 05:40 PM
adi paavi sweetie,

en pera repair pannuraiye... ithu nyayamaa :Ksp: :cry:

sweetie
09-05-2003, 02:50 AM
hahahahahaha :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: VENNAI ......

Summa enna ponnu ponnu nu solli kindle pannittu irukka illa ???

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmuuuuaaaahhhhhhh ....

:ahha: :ahha: :ahha: :ahha: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

vennai1
09-05-2003, 06:00 PM
sweetie,

you are the girl to kiss me... wish it was real than through
the net :ahha:

thirudan
09-06-2003, 07:14 PM
hmmm
vennai..aasai dosai appalam vadai.....
adra sakkai....adra sakkai.... :nono: :oops: