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    Hi all

    I have opened a seperate thread on a collection of my poems so anyone can give comments or suggestions or anythin u wanna say here

    I hope to write more and more ... with help from u guys .... special thanx to sweetmiche for great inspirations and bluey and vasan thatha for support.. n also to all others thanx

    cheers
    san @ sansdoll

    ps: the poems r here: http://www.geetham.net/forums/showthread.php?t=17602
    Last edited by san2003; 10-11-2006 at 04:19 PM.
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    San,
    Didnt want to disturb ur poem thread.....so commenting here....u can really write poems...keep it up ...just enjoyed reading them
    thanx pattams i will try to write more n better me still amateur
    glad u liked it
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    Hello AA @ AA !

    Amateur Author @ Aussie Angel.. :D :D :D

    Nice nice poems, AA.. :D Keep it up..

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    ps: Would you like strong worded, line by line criticisms on all your poems? :D Might cost you some money.. :P :P
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    Quote Originally Posted by vasan
    Hello AA @ AA !

    Amateur Author @ Aussie Angel.. :D :D :D

    Nice nice poems, AA.. :D Keep it up..

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    ps: Would you like strong worded, line by line criticisms on all your poems? :D Might cost you some money.. :P :P
    cho chweet thatha thanx

    why mus pay money for criticisms???? neenga yenna solla poringa???? somethin bad???
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    thanks for your comments,
    hope to see more real poems from your heart
    keep going...... ,

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    San,

    great collection, keep them coming babe :D



    miche
    what about the ones not from the heart ...what to do whith those


    blue.
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    AA,

    Poems are great!! Padam paarthu kathai sollura maathiri padam pottu kavithai ezuthi kalakiteenga.

    Criticisms will come definitely. :D :D :D Especially for the pictures. But I am with you Aussie Angel :D :D :D

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    thanx miche, bluey and anainar

    miche gurl.. ill try from deep down the heart my poems r genuine n true though..

    anainar.. the pic (r u talkin bout the paap pic?)

    im tryin at least one or two poem a week.. will see how... but am goin on hols soon.. so will catch up after that
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    (r u talkin bout the paap pic?)
    yep yep... and ask about the bird....
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    Quote Originally Posted by san2003

    anainar.. the pic (r u talkin bout the paap pic?)

    im tryin at least one or two poem a week.. will see how... but am goin on hols soon.. so will catch up after that
    babe, what else could it be but that one
    that pic has a major fan base among the male geethamites...johny boy didn't look half bad either ;o)

    wow 1-2 poem aweek...awesome ..good luck

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    wat bird????

    that pic has caused so much talk... arrghhh

    that pic has a major fan base among the male geethamites...johny boy didn't look half bad either ;
    he looks half hot doesnt he

    if anyone wanna give ideas on poems or topic on ... ur most welcomed to
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    chow chweet sanjaan... very nice poem and pics too :D


    me thaan waste

    sanjaan bird vandhu vandhu.... love bird

    paap pic la irukurra ..girl ku thaan bird solranggo

    rombho thaan ..bad boys ellorum irri irri ungalukulaam irukkuu

    EDIT: sanjaan unkaghaa orru gift :P

    opps...adhu fit achunna adhuvei use panikoo

    if u can't na try it

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    Quote Originally Posted by my dear juhajaan
    me thaan waste
    dont u dare say that again ok everyone has their own special talents n unique qualities.. ok now smile

    unnaku yeppidi paap pic teriyum gulp ... hehe ... anyway thanx for the gift.. chinna favor.. athu ron peru vendam.. simbhu peru podu peach peach... nerram irukumpothu podu ok'va? dhanxu
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    Quote Originally Posted by my dear sanjaan
    dont u dare say that again ok everyone has their own special talents n unique qualities.. ok now smile
    ok ok sollamattein smile-aa?? adhu eppadi pannannum

    ok smile eeeeeeeeee

    unnaku yeppidi paap pic teriyum gulp ... hehe ...
    Gulp

    adhu vandhu vandhu epddiyo teriyyum enoda ...eyes magic eyes heheehe

    naan vandhu indha amusment park la irukura mud oppss mad...ila ila...MOD adhu thaan teriyyum


    anyway thanx for the gift.. chinna favor.. athu ron peru vendam.. simbhu peru podu peach peach... nerram irukumpothu podu ok'va? dhanxu
    hoh ho...

    ama un chimbu ku thaan so many name irukei ...which name poddannum

    chimpa,sombu,chimbu, balh blah....edhu poddanumm

    i liked chimpan

    acho ...ok ok kovam vendamei jaanu
    simbhu vei podrein :P

    you always welcome ...ennaku indha madirri lossu vella pana rombho piddikkum

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    sanjaan this poem for me ya :P



    andha girls so cute :P nambha 2 perrum thannaei adhu

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    Keep writing gal

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    juha... antha 2 girls nambha thaan

    Quote Originally Posted by pattams
    Keep writing gal
    thanx pattams.. ive put ur reply here... sori
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    Quote Originally Posted by san2003
    juha... antha 2 girls nambha thaan

    Quote Originally Posted by pattams
    Keep writing gal
    thanx pattams.. ive put ur reply here... sori
    I shud have commented here ...its my mistake san

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    No problems pattams

    more to come
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sleepy Pattams
    I shud have commented here ...its my mistake san
    Quote Originally Posted by Cute Poetess
    thanx pattams.. ive put ur reply here... sori :D

    No problems pattams


    what you kids are talkin' about? :P

    AA.. Keep writing gal :P

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