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    .. thatha... pattams replied in the other thread.. athaan conpusion... but why ur conpused????

    thanx ... will try writing more... i feel bored writing useless love poems .. now me trying somethin different
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    thatha... pattams replied in the other thread.. athaan conpusion... but why ur conpused????


    enththa thread-la enna ezhuthinaangO.. no thread la nothing ezhuthinaango.. athaan me confused..

    kandu pudi.. kandu pudi kannnammaa.. illainnaa
    freeya vudu freeya vudu, paatu-kaarammaa.. :P :P

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    now me trying somethin different
    Yep.. I noticed. Whatever affects you deeply, find a way to express it eloquently..

    A good poetess must constantly reinvent herself - because the world around her is reinventing herself..

    Looking forward to reading more poems of old style and new types - of familiar loves and fresh new visions of the world..

    Go for it, AA.. Soar like an eagle... or.. better still, an angel... :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by vasan


    enththa thread-la enna ezhuthinaangO.. no thread la nothing ezhuthinaango.. athaan me confused..

    kandu pudi.. kandu pudi kannnammaa.. illainnaa
    freeya vudu freeya vudu, paatu-kaarammaa.. :P :P

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    Indha thread la comments eldninangO...adhu than sanjaan sonnagO

    ipo confusion pochnagO

    ilanna freeya vuddungO

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    Indha thread la comments eldninangO...adhu than sanjaan sonnagO
    anttha thread-la enna ezhuthi irunthaangO.. There is nothing there.. except AA's poems..

    kanna thiranththu paarunga Oii.. thappa irunththaa manichudungo..

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    ps: Sorry sans.. :D for the chit chat
    ps1: joke is already lost..
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    ...Magic O Magic

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    aama...yengge kaanapoiduchu????? pattams doin magic
    ippo im confused

    suha.. nee correct'a thaan sonna... but abit too late
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    Quote Originally Posted by vasan
    anttha thread-la enna ezhuthi irunthaangO.. There is nothing there.. except AA's poems..

    kanna thiranththu paarunga Oii.. thappa irunththaa manichudungo..

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    ps: Sorry sans.. :D for the chit chat
    ps1: joke is already lost..

    aamangO...nijamavei kanumungO :?

    chi pongO...neengO rombhO mosamngO
    ippadi panna me halwa saidhu kouka matenungO

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    suha.. nee correct'a thaan sonna... but abit too late

    naan enna panna...idnah thatha thaan edho magic paniducchu

    chorry sidey ku

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    Quote Originally Posted by san2003
    stillness...yet nothing seeems to be still...
    emptyness brings tears...and future no comfort?
    the mind at least is in perpetual motion...

    I'm puzzled by your poem....but I like it very much...perhaps because it puzzles me ...I do not know
    somthing that I cannot quite put my finger on
    Cum recte vivis, ne cures verba malorum


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    oh goodness bluey.. sori to confuse you
    the reason i titled it stillness.. is to ask the mind to be still ... so the end the mind is in stillness

    the poem is abit of a paradox i just realized.. if i start explaining in detail.. personal vishiyam velile varume

    basically wat im tryin to say is... the heart is empty of love.. so it cries and when lookin at the future... which seems so blur.. thats why blind and fearful .. n at the end... its time to reflect of the past.. i think i made u even more confused
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    if i start explaining in detail.. personal vishiyam velile varume
    oh.. EXPLAIN in complete details peeech.. :D

    There are better things yet, AA.. Future is not frightfully unclear but pleasantly vague.. that while good things are definitely going to come, and color and flavor will be surprisingly new while the shape will be endearingly familiar as well..

    Here is to hope, and cheer, and a whole lottaa new poems..

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    Quote Originally Posted by vasan
    if i start explaining in detail.. personal vishiyam velile varume
    oh.. EXPLAIN in complete details peeech.. :D
    naughty thatha

    thatha.. .sure thing future is vague.. but as u said... good things will come around especially my poems (if they r good )
    cheers thatha
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    Quote Originally Posted by san2003
    GoOd FrIeNd
    Nice poem San.
    - Valluvan

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    thanx valls ... whole poem padichingala illa poem title mattum padichingala
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    Quote Originally Posted by san2003
    thanx valls ... whole poem padichingala illa poem title mattum padichingala
    illa san. Fulla padichcheen. :D Whole poem was good, so just pasted the title instead the whole poem again.
    - Valluvan

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    ennanu solluven eppady solluven........ BEAUTYFULL SAN! Varthagale varamadenguthu pa.. nice thoughts!

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    achchachcho.. someone sprayed whole lot of gum/fevicol/glue on you..

    You have become a STICKY.. :P :P Keep it up, AA

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    ayyioo iithenna chinapilla thanamala iruku

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    gee... someone made me sticky ... thatha ... thanx alot.. now even i can see my poems

    thanx so much sugashiny .. im reading ur poems now
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    Quote Originally Posted by yasodha
    Nice poem Sans.....
    thanx yaso

    ps: can someone put yaso's comment from the other thread here?
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    Oh!Sanjaan............I just read all your poems........ :D

    They are really awesome.....
    Keep writing more poems......
    Pookal pookum tharunam aadhavane parthatharum illaye..
    Pularum kaalai pozhuthai muzhumathiyum pirinthu povathillaye..

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